Some twisted crap can be good, but not without knowing how the characters should behave as a result to the twisted crap (the post I just made about Ray in IDW's comic series is pretty twisted, but at least, people are in character for it, and Burnham knows the source material REALLY well).
Huge beef of mine is all that smarmy stuff and the characters being so out-of-character that I'm spending the whole time reading the fic, thinking things like: Egon's not a mushy/merry man... Nope, Peter would NOT take that shit sitting down and he'd crank the sarcasm up to 11... Ray is bouncy and excitable, yes, but he's not a hyperactive 4-year-old having just downed a large can of Red Bull... and so on.
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Some twisted crap can be good, but not without knowing how the characters should behave as a result to the twisted crap (the post I just made about Ray in IDW's comic series is pretty twisted, but at least, people are in character for it, and Burnham knows the source material REALLY well).
Huge beef of mine is all that smarmy stuff and the characters being so out-of-character that I'm spending the whole time reading the fic, thinking things like: Egon's not a mushy/merry man... Nope, Peter would NOT take that shit sitting down and he'd crank the sarcasm up to 11... Ray is bouncy and excitable, yes, but he's not a hyperactive 4-year-old having just downed a large can of Red Bull... and so on.